Hi there! I'm new to NG, so here goes my first, obscenely short review:
First off, I'd like to express my admiration for both Aelynn's vocals and your instrumentation. The transitions throughout were well done, especially when the vocals came in. The production is quite nice by my standards, the amount of reverb is well-selected and voice is well-balanced with the piano. The one thing I will suggest for your next composition is to turn down the input slightly for the vocals, I feel as though I can hear sounds of breathing at the end of certain lines - or perhaps my earbuds are just being as awful as usual. Nonetheless, this is a beautiful cover and you ought to be proud of it. Maybe if the track finally buffers (further than 2 minutes!!!) I will be able to give better feedback, but for now all I can say is well done!
-adieu